All Comments on 'Inside Me'

So effortlessly, so smoothly

pulling us in

a good read.

you have a soft touch with the pen..luring one into your wonder...luv you verse here...so rhythmic....like drifting in a tire on the gentle waves of of the sea..in fantasy...nice pen ...bluerains

You pulled me in with this one. Very sensual write! It is nice to untie the sash a bit, try to look like you are relaxing with the heart pounding, wondering...hoping...

Keep it up!

John... oops qp

In telling about him inside you, you bring us inside you. Very nice.

ty,bd

A hard man falls far for the soft heart, you have surrounded us with your words Peaches and overwhelmed us with your gentle spirit!

I think we like you love!!

Wiliam