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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/15/05

You have it down

I can't always follow the subject, but the words
always flow smoothly. I would love to see you dance
since you sure have rhythm. sand

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by sweet GA peaches08/15/05

TO BE IN AWE....

... is to take ones mind into places, others dare to go. So you have expressed, here in these fine tuned verses, that speak of utter passion to singed flesh....in hopes of bluerain.... breath-takingingly, stunning... 'awe me again'.... sweetGApeaches

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by My Erotic Tale08/15/05

terra cotta

I am intrigued by the warriors and your poem...thanks for sharing your talented writes with us blue~

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by tazz31705/23/12

BLESSING THE GROUND

where the icon stands, TK U MLJ LV NV

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