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When Will I See You Again

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/15/05

Melting

This must be one lucky man for you to write a poem that erotic about.

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by LeBroz08/15/05

Too much/Too little

Keep working on your poetic skills; this could have been better. Too many questions, not enough answers. {They're good questions - just too many of them} You have several poems here, all contained within the confines of this one offering. A good start though - keep at it.

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