All Comments on 'Housekeeper Pt. 01'

Ridiculous, but lots of fun! I'm looking forward to the rest.

The plot of this story is completely stupid. I know these stories aren't real but try to have some realism to them.

Over the top but fun. Looking forward to what’s next.

But “turgid nub”? Really?

that was pretty stupid. When does he learn he won the lottery? OH, yeah, after the divorce is final. Can't wait to read the continuation.

Thanks for the story.

The housekeeper, the cook, and the lawyer? Must not be as bad as wife thinks. I believe I'll wait a while to rate this one.

STUPID!!! He can't satisfy his wife so she heats, but he can keep 2 'housekeepers/whores' satisfied, at the same time no less?

Slow down and use the brakes before you park your rig in the garage.

Ah, if only real life was like this!

When

Great idea for a story, but slow down. It like you were trying to skip over the important bits just to get to the sex. Yes that’s important too but the lead up and follow through are just as important to keep us engaged in the story

Agree that it could have been longer, but can't wait for the next part.

not to short i thought just rt

He must still be in that drunken stupor at the bottom of the stairs and this is all a crazy dream.

Thankfully a short, funky story with no relevance to reality but a bit of fun.

T.T.

Love how you changed the language of orgasm from English to Spanish. Si, si indeed! That was worth the price of admission.

R.

Bring on Pt 2! Si Si!

Getting drunk won't solve anything. Overall very strange!!

Terse is one word for it.

I know sex is the main thing on this site, but it would be nice to know something about the characters. How old is he? You mentioned children but are they home, or left home?

It all left me feeling there was no story at all, just an excuse to write sex scenes.

If he can afford a full time maid and a cook. And afford to put the daughter thru law school. But everybody seems to have sex on the brain! Wild romp.

Loved this story,made my cock very hard. I used to fuck at least 6 women a week and not always the same women. Now I'm living in a new town,and hoping to be back at it again real soon. I also am a Tit man. If I'm going to fuck a woman or women,they have to have big Tits,or no long hard cock for them

for Round two. To see what comes of the Ex. Does she try to come back. after finding out her Money man expects her to clean the house and do the Laundry.

This is not how the world works,.....but it should be. Hilarious

This story is without a doubt, FICTION

I'm laughing, which is obviously the point here ;-)

Second time around and I still love it. Who cares how crazy it is? Every so often I read your stories a second and third time and never get tired of them, that's how you know their good.

So far this is a nothing story,two and three need to be better.

That's even less character development than in the average porn movie :)

4 as it was hot but there was next to no plot. Yeah I know, complaining about a lack of plot in an erotic story, kinda ridiculous but still.

Early on, frank asked‘why are you doing this to me and our kids’. Then nothing about kids. Why mention kids if they are irrelevant?