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by Belegon08/16/05

Lots of juxtaposition...

and some interesting pairings and images. I would have found it hard to imagine an erotic poem that used both "yuppies" and "underground railroad" before this...nice piece OMS.

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by lil_elvis08/16/05

Strange, Heady Brew

So much to contemplate here. Past vs. present, kink vs. propriety. The complexity, so simply stated, is gonna leave me contemplating this one for a long time.

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by AppleBiter08/16/05

I echo

the statements about complexity. Hmm. This poem really causes a person to pause and think -- that is a sign of excellence. ;) Well done, as usual, Scarlett. :)

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by Honey12308/16/05

Wow

Nicely done, gorgeous!

~Honey

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by sophia jane08/16/05

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Loved it, Scarlett.

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by impressive08/17/05

Oh, I don't know ...

... a breathalizer test might've kept this gem from ever being posted! It's succint & gritty. ;) Well done, OMS. Kisses, Imp

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by Anonymous08/18/05

Cuff me, beat me this is good!

You beautiful bizarre thing, love this. Fabulous voice and mood.

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by RhymeFairy08/23/05

*Gulp*

A lil outta my league, but I LIKE IT !!!!
Love the imagery ... boy
the visuals this brings to mind.
Naughty... but a Naughty Nice ~

Grrr ~

More Please Gurl ~!!!!

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