by rohan1971
You cheated on your wife and broke the bond of marriage. For shame.
SEX WITH ONES SISTER OR MOTHER IS INCEST, SEX WITH IN LAW IS JUST CHEATING. YOUR STORY WAS POORLY WRITEN AND HAD ABOUT AS MUCH HEAT AS A AIR CONDITIONER. WHOM EVER SAID YOU COULD WRITE WAS LIEING TO YOU. DON'T GIVE UP YOUR DAY JOB.
This is really a terrible story. There is no plot, the writing is not even of a mediocre standard, and there is nothing in it to qualify as erotic. Why don't you use the help of someone to edit your stories before even attempting to have them posted on Literotica?
Your Story is Well written Erotic story Giving us the indication of an excellent writer in the near future. keep wtiting donot give any antention to the not worthy attacks.
Thank you .I am a reader from middle East
stories like this are very much true atleast for indian guys and only indians can understand this and no 1 else.keep it up guy
It is almost like that happened to me. Except that instead of two wheeler it was MARUTI 800
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