It was like a 10th grader wrote this. Did you ever study grammar in school? Do you remember any of it?
poor grammer and was extremly boreing. your story simply went through the motions it lack any kind of feeling as well as passion.no heat none.
I liked it a lot. I was an English major in college and could care less about imperfect grammar. Great description. Keep the stories coming.
not a bad story line
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English
Grammar
It was like a 10th grader wrote this. Did you ever study grammar in school? Do you remember any of it?
kind of lame
poor grammer and was extremly boreing. your story simply went through the motions it lack any kind of feeling as well as passion.no heat none.
loved it
I liked it a lot. I was an English major in college and could care less about imperfect grammar. Great description. Keep the stories coming.
good
not a bad story line
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