All Comments on 'A Real Fuckin' Nice Town Ch. 01'

this is a good story,but make several chapters to it though.

you are superb. this story made me wet and horny. a great story, gets right down to business, yet is still very well paced.

THIS is how you write a direct, concise story and not make it sound like it was rushed out before the author finished him/herself off. It had real solid writing behind it, the pace was appropriate, the language was a firecracker.

I enjoyed the story, short enough to enjoy during a quick break yet detailed enough to be enjoyable.

Feel free to develop the characters and add more chapters