All Comments on 'Bliss'

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WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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These first 3 lines are great:

she doesn’t feel objects

as objects

but extensions of His touch

sophia janesophia janeover 18 years ago
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I don't know how you get into the head of the submissive so well, but however you do it, I like it. :)

chun_gongchun_gongalmost 18 years ago
Shivers

Your words send shivers down my spine - and thoughts that echo through my brain. Fabulous!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
TO BE THAT IN ZONE

urges no longer matter, TK U MLJ LV NV

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