I very much enjoyed your poem, the rythm was perfect. Art~
different feel from most; nice flow and sound.
Mystical and mysterious all in one breathe. I love it .. the flow and the distance of this work is very nice.
I just love the FEEL of this poem.
Whimsical and airy.
Wonderful flow ...
Picture perfect if ya ask me ~
you give me, in a fine array of colours.... ~SGP~
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