im definately hooked on this series now. my only gripe is its a bit too short. but i like the plot line and the direction of the story. definatly an enjoyable piece to read. just wish it was a bit longer. it'd be interesting how the apartment situation turns out. maybe getting accidentally pregnant and having to face the parents.
i like the style and flow of the story. it seems to get better with each story.
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Anonymous08/25/05
Another great chapter...
If not a bit short. This series is very enjoyable. I do think that Jack should have showered, as cum has a rather pungent odor.
by
Anonymous08/26/05
KB5
Loving the story - except for the anal bits.
Lukas
What a nasty little cum slut you created. The stories just starting though. I really think you need to get these two thru school, and back home so they can seduce their parents! Mom and Dad are just too hot to ignore. Get to it!
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Anonymous04/22/06
keep it coming!
not as good as chapter 4, but still hot. and i LOVE the anal play! just don't have them screw their parents. the mom teaching kathy how to be a freak is exciting on its own.
English
captivating little series...
im definately hooked on this series now. my only gripe is its a bit too short. but i like the plot line and the direction of the story. definatly an enjoyable piece to read. just wish it was a bit longer. it'd be interesting how the apartment situation turns out. maybe getting accidentally pregnant and having to face the parents.
i like the style and flow of the story. it seems to get better with each story.
Another great chapter...
If not a bit short. This series is very enjoyable. I do think that Jack should have showered, as cum has a rather pungent odor.
KB5
Loving the story - except for the anal bits.
Lukas
Don't stop now...
What a nasty little cum slut you created. The stories just starting though. I really think you need to get these two thru school, and back home so they can seduce their parents! Mom and Dad are just too hot to ignore. Get to it!
keep it coming!
not as good as chapter 4, but still hot. and i LOVE the anal play! just don't have them screw their parents. the mom teaching kathy how to be a freak is exciting on its own.
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