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Oh, what an Imp!
You speak so sweetly;
I want to sin!
Reminds me of an old story, the question being, "What is necessary to obtain forgiveness from sin?" as the 6 year-old answers, "Sin."
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Your Poem was mentioned in Saturdays Review
Thanks for sharing ~
~ Jenn
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That's a helluva prayer Imp. Well done.
oh my
Wicked girl !!
Vivid
And sharp.
Your words cut through some heavy lines here and make everything oh-so-real.
Nicely done.
leave it to the Imp...
...to provide me with a new definition for "religious experience" *grin* Daring and delicious Imp.
well, bless me!
I know you're not supposed to covet your neighbor's poem, but I really wish I'd written that one. What great rhythm. Thanks.
Let's hear a big Amen!
I am ready to drop to my knees in prayer. Finally a religion for the rest of us.
hmmmm........
all at once creative and disturbing. i still don't know how i feel about the sacrilege.....but so well written
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