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Cute ~
I like the imagery here.
I think ya might have took it
a bit further. The pic is sooo cute.
Just wanted to sit and watch.
Thanks to your great imagery
I got to visit and relax.
Just a lovely lil trip.
Thanks ~
Great
Very beautiful!
Another good piece
Your words compliment the image
nicely, you paint a lovely picture
and I enjoyed the journey.
Thanks.
~ Jenn
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This illustrated is better of the two you submitted today, but as stated in the other one's public comments, the photo does nothing interesting for the text.
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Well done, though the photo would have been more satisfying with the moose being more dominant - too swallowed by its surroundings here.
excellent
wow, I enjoyed this write very much, and I can only ask, ...did you take the picture great job...more please (o_o)
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With a telephoto lens and without the last verse(it reads like an advert) this would have been even better . But I envy you the experience!
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Again, I would have left the picture out. You write beautifully- lots of good images here, but your meter was just enough off to make this reader trip up.
Tattler
life.
An admirable attempt at explaining the joys of hunting Moose. The photo, tho' from a distance was enchanting. Moose can be Majestic and proud and at the same time be shy. Nicely done.
HUNTING AS A SPORT OR HOBBY
still requires permission and tags. TK U MLJ LV NV
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