The story was wonderful...very hot and explicit, but what killed it for me was the mention of the dildo..i dislike those toys in an all feminine encounter. Other than that pretty good. Mari
Well written and I hope we see more on these ladies, mothers and daughters, soon.
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The story was wonderful...very hot and explicit, but what killed it for me was the mention of the dildo..i dislike those toys in an all feminine encounter. Other than that pretty good.
Mari
Loved the Story! Love your writing!
Well written and I hope we see more on these ladies, mothers and daughters, soon.
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