All Comments on 'Adventures of Nick Nelson Ch. 19'

A most excellent story indeed. I couldn't stop reading. Well done. A few omitted words but not to great a distraction. An epilog would be nice telling how they stayed together happily in the years to come.

Excellent writing. This was long, but you kept my interest. You had nice discriptions of their motorcycle trip and other activities besides the hot sex. Glad you had all three finally get together.

Your ending sucked they didn't all move in together didn't get married ect