More than deserving of being in the top 5 incest serials. Superbly deviant, insanely hot. Just the way I likes 'em
by
Anonymous08/30/05
Awesome!!
This series is brilliant! Read it all and loved every minute. But, please, these girls seriously need to lose their ass cherries, and soon! :)
by
Anonymous08/31/05
Best Yet!!!
Another Homerun for Nikki. This was the best one yet. The 5some with 2 sets of brothers and sisters and a cousin was truly awesome. But the best of all was when Steve and Olivia finnaly had sex face to face. Another bind-blowing chapter in this great piece of art. On pins-and-nettles awaiting the next installment. Thanks again Nikkie and please dont make us wait too long. Keep up the great work, you truly are one the best on Literotica.
Holndawall
by
Anonymous09/09/05
Amazing
Only found this recently, love it - great writing, really hot! Please continue this series.
by
Anonymous09/14/05
good story and funny
i like to see steve do olivia and julie the same time in a threesome.
by
Anonymous09/15/05
name errors
I absolutely love the story, I can't wait for more! However just a couple things were awry in the text of the story. A couple times Julie was called Emily, and Adriana called Julie on accident. There were some other spelling errors, but with a proofreader before submission that should be no trouble at all. Yes I know I'm a dork for criticizing the grammar in a dirty story, but it is such a good series that it pains me to see anything less than perfection. Keep up the good work!!
~ZZgothikpunk~
by
Anonymous09/22/05
why not write more about steve and julie
why other stories before finishing this good story.
by
Anonymous10/07/05
Whooo!
Gimme more action like this. I like to masturbate on it and it gave me 10 orgasms (i'm male!). I'd like to read about a nice family "fuck"together sometimes or experimenting with wet sensations in the shower/bathroom. Great work, keep on writing!
Top notch stuff that is very fantastic to read. Amazing writing style that I enjoy a lot.
by
Anonymous11/05/05
give us more
you already know you are a good writer,keep writing your fans are hungry for your stories.
by
Anonymous11/10/05
how much money are steve and julie making
on the internet how much money are they making.more steve and lexi,she ready to be his.
by
Anonymous12/10/05
I need more!
So far, one of the best story series I've ever read on here. Don't let it stop like the rest have!!
Keep it just as hardcore and detailed so I keep spending 3 hours reading the stories over and over again!
Can't wait for the next one!
by
Anonymous05/24/06
HOT
Nikki,
Just gotta say that after reading lots of storys on this site your are the HOTTEST by far!!! great work keep it up
by
Anonymous07/13/06
...
I thought with all the lesbian action Steve and Jordan might get together...
Think about that.
by
Anonymous01/08/07
Wow
I love your work Nikki. I recently found this series and i cant stop reading it!
-Kai
by
Anonymous08/05/07
Love it
mmmmmm Nikki, I just can't stop reading your story, and can't stop cummimg either. mmmmmmm my cock is getting a good workout.
by
Anonymous11/28/07
great
gosh, if the others r as good, im going to have cummed like 50 times. great job.
9inch
by
Anonymous07/27/08
Darling Nikki
Don't let these amateurs tell you what to do with your story. You're doing splendidly on your own! I do agree with one of their suggestions: Keep It Going! Turn this into a serial; maybe even a saga. (Has erotic literature had a saga yet?! Yours could be the first, if you choose to go there!) Either way, your writing is an exceptional display of skill and imagination. The only way to improve it is to continue it.
by
Anonymous04/29/09
love it
Ur stories r great the best even jus try n keep the name straight please it gets confusing
by
Anonymous05/01/09
Love love love it!
I love ur series, whenever my boyfriend isnt near i go straight to ur stories and get my fingers busy between my legs and i always have a number of gr8 mind blowing orgasms
It's less chapters here, but I think you desserve it tough, since you're working so hard to make us cum in all directions.... I love the story, keep it going.
This was awesome. I just thought it was great when Emily got her pussy filled, but it got better when Adriana got it on with John and when Steve and Olivia did the deed. Bravo! A sticky two thumbs up!
some of your scenes make me to remember of my own in my youth. except I never try something incestuous, probably because I had an old & very sick mother & no sisters at all. But in my country making love or even marry your cousins not only excludes of any incestuous actions, but also encourages by our community to marry them. We have a special proverb: The marriage between two cousins, (specially when their fathers are brothers), is matched in heavens! (I'm Persian)
A great series , great sex with willing participants all the way through the family chain.
Mom's are equally sexy, horny and wiling. Look forward to the next chapters.
When is Steve getting shaved..? Can you imagine him being bald..?!? All the women would go ballistic ..
Great tale and great cums....!
English
Excellent!
Definitely the best of this story so far. You have to continue asap.
Superb
More than deserving of being in the top 5 incest serials. Superbly deviant, insanely hot. Just the way I likes 'em
Awesome!!
This series is brilliant! Read it all and loved every minute. But, please, these girls seriously need to lose their ass cherries, and soon! :)
Best Yet!!!
Another Homerun for Nikki. This was the best one yet. The 5some with 2 sets of brothers and sisters and a cousin was truly awesome. But the best of all was when Steve and Olivia finnaly had sex face to face. Another bind-blowing chapter in this great piece of art. On pins-and-nettles awaiting the next installment. Thanks again Nikkie and please dont make us wait too long. Keep up the great work, you truly are one the best on Literotica.
Holndawall
Amazing
Only found this recently, love it - great writing, really hot! Please continue this series.
good story and funny
i like to see steve do olivia and julie the same time in a threesome.
name errors
I absolutely love the story, I can't wait for more! However just a couple things were awry in the text of the story. A couple times Julie was called Emily, and Adriana called Julie on accident. There were some other spelling errors, but with a proofreader before submission that should be no trouble at all. Yes I know I'm a dork for criticizing the grammar in a dirty story, but it is such a good series that it pains me to see anything less than perfection. Keep up the good work!!
~ZZgothikpunk~
why not write more about steve and julie
why other stories before finishing this good story.
Whooo!
Gimme more action like this. I like to masturbate on it and it gave me 10 orgasms (i'm male!). I'd like to read about a nice family "fuck"together sometimes or experimenting with wet sensations in the shower/bathroom. Great work, keep on writing!
Just plain out awesome
Top notch stuff that is very fantastic to read. Amazing writing style that I enjoy a lot.
give us more
you already know you are a good writer,keep writing your fans are hungry for your stories.
how much money are steve and julie making
on the internet how much money are they making.more steve and lexi,she ready to be his.
I need more!
So far, one of the best story series I've ever read on here. Don't let it stop like the rest have!!
Keep it just as hardcore and detailed so I keep spending 3 hours reading the stories over and over again!
Can't wait for the next one!
HOT
Nikki,
Just gotta say that after reading lots of storys on this site your are the HOTTEST by far!!! great work keep it up
...
I thought with all the lesbian action Steve and Jordan might get together...
Think about that.
Wow
I love your work Nikki. I recently found this series and i cant stop reading it!
-Kai
Love it
mmmmmm Nikki, I just can't stop reading your story, and can't stop cummimg either. mmmmmmm my cock is getting a good workout.
great
gosh, if the others r as good, im going to have cummed like 50 times. great job.
9inch
Darling Nikki
Don't let these amateurs tell you what to do with your story. You're doing splendidly on your own! I do agree with one of their suggestions: Keep It Going! Turn this into a serial; maybe even a saga. (Has erotic literature had a saga yet?! Yours could be the first, if you choose to go there!) Either way, your writing is an exceptional display of skill and imagination. The only way to improve it is to continue it.
love it
Ur stories r great the best even jus try n keep the name straight please it gets confusing
Love love love it!
I love ur series, whenever my boyfriend isnt near i go straight to ur stories and get my fingers busy between my legs and i always have a number of gr8 mind blowing orgasms
Hey!
It's less chapters here, but I think you desserve it tough, since you're working so hard to make us cum in all directions.... I love the story, keep it going.
My cock is sore just thinking about this
Holy smokes!
This was awesome. I just thought it was great when Emily got her pussy filled, but it got better when Adriana got it on with John and when Steve and Olivia did the deed. Bravo! A sticky two thumbs up!
Nice
some of your scenes make me to remember of my own in my youth. except I never try something incestuous, probably because I had an old & very sick mother & no sisters at all. But in my country making love or even marry your cousins not only excludes of any incestuous actions, but also encourages by our community to marry them. We have a special proverb: The marriage between two cousins, (specially when their fathers are brothers), is matched in heavens! (I'm Persian)
Oh My, Nikki
Loved the intense if but brief knife play between Steve and Liv !
You are my new favorite author !
Brother/Sister is the best!
I have to say that I have read EVERY chapter, so far, and can't wait to get to the next one!!
Love this series
Wish I was in this family
Loving this Nikki
A great series , great sex with willing participants all the way through the family chain.
Mom's are equally sexy, horny and wiling. Look forward to the next chapters.
When is Steve getting shaved..? Can you imagine him being bald..?!? All the women would go ballistic ..
Great tale and great cums....!
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