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Blue Revelations part IV...the end.

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/21/05

Smooth Blue

When you leave town you go. I have enjoyed the dream like
view flowing well from line to line and poem to poem.
'liquid exotica'
I just had to see it in a poem. sandspike

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by My Erotic Tale08/21/05

the end

very nice series...I always enjoy your writes blue your depths are deeper than my river but I can relate to the blue, blue

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by LeBroz12/04/06

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Nice soft comforting feel in these words.

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by tazz31707/31/12

NOW THAT WE ARE HERE

what is our plan to comprehend, TK U MLJ LV NV

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