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by Anonymous08/27/05

wow

short but very nice story babe
lots of huggggggs for it

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by Pyro09/30/05

Show me

I would have liked a little more of her feelings/sensations of what was happening. You've told me what HE was seeing/feeling/experiencing, but you didn't show me what she was going through; the turbulent sensations she must have been feeling, the doubt, the desire, the need, the release.

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