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Regarding Ron Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by saw_man108/26/05

Dating Site?

What dating site was that?

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by Anonymous08/26/05

Just your name gives me an erection.

Then reading the story I convulse in ogasm. Black Silk Panties indeed! Can I have them stuffed in my mouth?

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by don8765408/26/05

Good, but could have been better

This story has a lot of potential. But it could be improved on by possibly in a future chapter of telling exactly how two on-line lovers decided to meet in person, especially with one of the being married to another and having a couple of kids.
Perhaps after that is done, you can show the parties as developing a relationship into one of where they "start" their own family, in order to possibly guarantee an ongoing relationship of raising a baby or two in secret all the while that he remains married to his first wifey and raising their kids from that marriage?

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