All Comments on 'Pleasure in Control Ch. 05'

Again a masterfully written peice. Please continue as I am hooked on the adventure and more so on the erotics.

Her style and story and increadable. A woman who understands the journy is what makes the "destination" increadable. Write faster damn it!!!! ;-)

Enough of the tease. When is this bitch going to get fucked and fucked hard?

Unbelievable! I have read this several times and it remains a marvellous story.

Hi, Julia: I have no interest in women's clothing, but I peeked ahead and saw that you had written about some pretty sexy situations. I would have given up during Chapter 1 if you hadn't been such a good writer. Now I know that I will enventually read all 17 chapters. I will skip over the bondage parts, however. I wish you a long and productive writing career, and lots of great sex with gorgeous young ladies.

P.S. You can make a dash by entering hyphen, hyphen, enter, backspace.

That was just glorious. You could heat up the whole room with that scene and that is no doubt just what you did when you wrote this chapter. Thank you, Hector

Julia meets a new Personal Shopper. Stevie proves to be most helpful and very desirable. In the private changing room they intimately admire each other's body and both leave burning with lust, which is sure to explode in a future encounter. Julia then excites her mentor with the luscious details and is compelled to seductively masturbate for her. Kristen, now unable to suppress her own urges any longer, begs Julia to allow her to masturbate. Julia graciously consents.

As always, subtle teasing, sexy lingerie and smoltering lust all converge in the private changing room. So literate, perfectly connected with previous chapters and wonderfully prepares you for your own lover or fantasies.

I actually got wet while reading this and doing nothing else =)

Fabulous story, may ur ink never run dry, more story pls

Wow - fantastic discription of raw, hard mastrubation. Almost smelt the muskiness when they both came. Will keep reading. Thanks so far.

Granite Mac

I might not last all seventeen chapters! Fantastic

You finally answered my curiosity about what the girls do in the Private Rooms; letting the clients go first! Very erotic situation, and I eagerly await what you DO with this prospect of mutual self-pleasuring. Also, I'm titillated by Kirsten's vibe, mentioned a while back -- now she's HOME!

Delicious!

Incendiary

I hope it gets better, I was beginning to wonder if it would

Hanging in there for the physical intimate contact between these beautiful women.