All Comments on 'Sister/Brother in the Hot Tub'

I really loved this one because it is so-oo-oo hot! I love reading about how the brother had a big mushroom head on his cock! Golly, just reading about his size almost made me cum! Thanks for a good story!

Good, but proof-reading is a good thing. Get rid of the spelling errors and the CAPS LOCK. Otherwise, a fairly hot story.

Pretty hot, but little actual story.

In desparate need of editing.

All those CAPS - bad. Lack of "quotes" - bad.

Dung-pushing - gross.

Stan

Was a very very hot story

the same so the lead in is the part that makes the story enjoyable or just another BS tale.

I guess guys enjoy this kind of talk but Crude conversation repels me. Once you get into the sex a few references to 'cunt' or 'tits' etc when properly used can add to the excitment of the story.

But this is just another hum-drum tale by a loud-mouth to his buddies. Definitely not exciting to me.

great story except you have to mention over and over about how big your cock is making me think it's really small.

stop telling how big your dick is it gets annoying after a while everything else was amazing

I was turned off at the fact that you seem to be more stuck up than anyone I have ever known.

I read 2 paragraphs worth of writing of you talking about how good looking and perfect you are.

GET A LIFE

oh God,this story seems so true that i had to jerk and cum ,thinking of my sister who is the woman i want most to love,cherish and fuck.Sue, i loveu, iwant u baby.hope this will happen soon as i note that she is glancing more and more often at my big cock .the other day we saw a porno movie together with one of her friends.we were wordless after the movie and went to bed without any comment.all i can say that i jerked very hard thinking more about Sue than her friend.my cum was so thick.next morning i saw her her red panties and the black one of her friend.they were both so wet that i smelled and smelled their salty cum and piss that i took only 2 mins to come.Making love with your sister /brother should be accepted by society BUT with mutual agreement

knew in the first paragraph it wasn't worth reading i mean come on a two sentence paragraph and screw it up in the first four WORDs really "WELL HERE IS GOES" would you believe "IT" get a good editor and never ever post a story without going through them first

great story, thanks for sharing

ive not fucked my sister in yrs as she moved away but my god was our sex amazing! I must off filled her pussy up more than 200 times hehe

English was very poor, story was hot needs tidying up

That was fucking good story...but did not tell us how he fucked her ass...

That's SOOO fucking insest bro... You and her need to be shot in the face... *facepalm*.

That would have been so fucking hot, if it wasn't your fucking sister, you disgusting excuse for a human.

i love to fuck other sister

That was so fuckin good.. I would have loved to be yo sister... I got so horny off dis I went n my brother saw me reading dis n he read it wit me n we ended up fuckin each other now me n my brother fuk every tym our parents aren't home even doe he 17 n im 15 but me n my brother are are very close he loves my pussy n I love his 7 ½ or 8 in. Cock oh yes baby fuk me

Well i hope that they are still a couple. I mean ,i hope that that they share a bed .

I'm gunna admit, this got me horny. But really!?!?!? U guys would fuck ur own siblings!?!?!? U guys must be soooo much of a loser, u have to ask ur bro/Sid to fuck u.

Wat

You all say that it's wrong and perverted, but who made you click on this page or read the story YOU?! So you are all just as sick, leave the author alone.. as for the nice comments, keep being nice and if you so feel copy this message ' thank you

I would love to have been in a threesome with them. I woulg have eayen her pussy after he came in it and i would have sucked his cock untiiil he filled my mouth with hot sweet cum.. Yummmmmmmy!

This made me so horney!

I was masturbating so hard through this story that I got a 30 second orgasm!!! I would love to have sex with them! Im cumming as I'm writing this comment. I'm so horney...... I think I'll rub my clot. Mwa-ha-ha-ha!!!

I couldn't stop masturbating I wish I had a brother like this to fuck me

I want a sister like that

And there's a good reason why the boy insists on how big and fat his young cock is. It's the reason his sister Connie's so wild to get her brother's fat 8+incher up her cunt. She'd probably want her brother's cock even if he weren't so well hung, but the sheer size of it overheats her little twat and she spreads her legs wide for her big hunky brother and cums like crazy when he blows his big brotherly balls up her tight little twat. Up his sister's cunt is where a brother's sperm belongs.

Nice how bro and sis did it lots. Bad English at times, too much talk of your own cock.

Great build up of passion, don't shave her pussy, and next time write about filling

her sweet ass with love seed.. Fill all her holes.

DANGER, WILL ROBINSON!!!!!!!!!

This story was great and believe it or not Brothers fucking their Sisters is more common then anyone thinks it is. It's wrong to do, but when it comes down to it we're all human and sometimes people don't care who they fuck. Especially if someone lives with their own Sister it just makes it all the more easier.

Nice story, don't worry about all the grammar Nazis and all the mindless criticism, sure it could be polished slightly, but it's a hot story and it gets people aroused, thats what the site is for first and foremost. Good job man, keep it up.

Great concept, reasonably fleshed out. Went kind of quickly from shaving to jamming it in......

The poor grammar and spelling was somewhat distracting; having someone proof read it would make really good.

Why all the capital letters? They definitely detract from the readers enjoyment. .

Why would anyone want to fuck an asshole when there is a pussy right there? I not gay or Bi like the pussy boy in this story.

There is no such thing as vaginal hairs. The vagina is the fuck tube/birth canal and is absolutely the only thing it is.

those who cannot write criticize them that do, usually anonymously. keep writing.

Stereotypical. A better command of the English language would help.

Would OF

Should OF

Could OF

WOULD Have

SHould HAVE

Could HAVE

Have somebody proof-read your stories before posting/publishing them.

The spelling mistakes, punctuation, and other grammatical errors are really irritating and annoying.