All Comments  for

Sins Dessert

byRhymeFairy©
All
Comments (6)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/21/05

^^^

Your poem has been mentioned in the Sunday reviews.
du lac!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Jennifer C08/21/05

Wowza RF

Now this is one HOTTT Poem!
Sexy isn't the word, this
piece is on fire, with passion
and lust and pure driven animal
instincts!

drink the sin, from my
lips, of lechery. taste
my juice, of jasmine
jelly. lick, till you
drop.

This is fucking Hot Poetry
my smutty, nutty, buddy!
~ Jenn

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/21/05

dessert

a very teasing and pleasing poem, RF you have grown into a beautiful addition to lits daily sprout of poetry flowers grin... I enjoy your poetry for as lot of reasons, one is it is understandable and not a puzzle, thank you for this

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/22/05

rolling off rhyme as an almond oil

massage..however ,,, since we must be more abstract..you missed your capitals...dang...I do that so often ...blue

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz08/23/05

~~

Hey there, RF ~
listen to JC, your little smutty, buddy;
she knows of what she speaks;
you're hot here and not a sweet lil soccer Mom;
you define new standards
for what it means to be a red hot Sex Machine !!

Sssssssmokin............

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sweet GA peaches10/10/05

DID I HEAR...

Sweet little soccer mom ?

Oh hell ya, the kind that
packs a sexy ass punch,
NEWS FLASH !!!!!
she aint dead yet !!
lol.....

and yes gurl,
you are
smmmmmmokin !

*****
-sGp-

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Sins Dessert  or
More submissions by RhymeFairy.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel