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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/03/05

Loved it.

I've known a lot of cops in my days, this did my heart good to read.

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by Sir_Nathan09/03/05

A pretty good short story...

I would have liked to have known more about Mariah. In that sense, the old guy being there was a good device under-utilised. I liked the surprise (finding out he was a cop), but again more ambiguous background info would have helped raise this from a decent story to something fairly special.

SN

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by Extreme Bohunk09/03/05

nice job FINC

Good story, gritty.

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by voltsol05/01/06

I have always been a Mariah fan

Another delightful story ! Bill is so crazy it makes this story so much fun to read. Too bad Bill couldn't have been left with her a little longer.... perhaps getting rid of the car and finally throwing her limp used body in a shallow grave behind the outhouse. I will never look at or listen to the pop singer again without thinking of this story. Thankyou.

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by Anonymous05/24/06

I was quite impressed.

It gets better as you sit back and think about it, too.

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by Anonymous01/12/08

Thanks ~

Another great story ~ thanks for the fun read!

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by visceralgirl11/25/10

Please proofread

Too many grammatical errors and typos spoil your otherwise great story.

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by Anonymous06/28/12

mariah?

Im thinking, what with the fancy car, toned body, good voice, and the name Mariah, that it was in fact, mariah carey

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by Anonymous04/23/13

Small detail...

I believe you meant to use the word "Gallic" rather than "Gaelic" at the beginning. Two very different meanings.
Could use proof reading or editing.
Pretty good story, though.

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by debbiev10/24/13

OMG...that is my fantasy.....me being Mariah.

I swear that has been my fantasy for a long time....city girl in the country.....car broke down or kidnapped by some country bumpkin(s)....and stripped and used of all dignity. wow....just awesome. i got very wet reading it.

loved the ending.....very clever. :-)

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by Anonymous01/24/16

Fantastic!

My absolute favorite piece, I keep coming back again and again to read this one! Very talented writer and definitely a perfect work!

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