Despite all the errors, the essential essence of the story shone through - especially the clear message that older women still have the juices of life flowing freely. Write on mama.
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Anonymous12/06/05
Almost authentic
Almost authentic, as a story should be, even the spelling adds to the flavour. Most women of that era don't like anal intercourse, it's not what it was designed for. Also she's only 20 years beyond her prime, almost the same as him. pity she doesn't name him, or add a more detailed location, just to add to the readers imagination.
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Great Effort
Despite all the errors, the essential essence of the story shone through - especially the clear message that older women still have the juices of life flowing freely. Write on mama.
Almost authentic
Almost authentic, as a story should be, even the spelling adds to the flavour. Most women of that era don't like anal intercourse, it's not what it was designed for. Also she's only 20 years beyond her prime, almost the same as him. pity she doesn't name him, or add a more detailed location, just to add to the readers imagination.
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