All Comments on 'A Bird in Winter'

Nice calm seduction dude, I personally would it were a 69 situation, but that's just me.

A 'good fairy' as u said, gave u a nice present; you should return the favor.

R

I sure hope there is a continuation. I also hope Dan stays straight or bi-curious. (Straight female here).

Oh that was so nice. I'm str8 but have always wanted to experience what it would be like to have my dick sucked and to suck someone elses dick. My wife is a great cock sucker but I doubt she is as good as a another man would be. I would love to have a chance to find out. But, being a loved man. I am faitful and do not cheat. But it was fun to jack off thinking about how nice it would be to have a guy sucking me off.

Thank you for your story and I plan to see if you've writen anything else and I'll happly read it.

Would love a follow up! There's something so alluring about a straight guy getting done by another guy. You wrote that really well, I hope you continue to write erotica - of any kind!

I liked the story because I just started sucking cocks.I'm 74 and I know I waited too long.But I'm sure enjoying it now.

Bill

This is a wonderful story, wonderful title as well. Heartfelt, warm and with more than just the usual list of who did what. You feel what the characters are feeling both emotionally and physically. Thank you for a really lovely tale of friendship and gift-giving.

sweet and erotic. keep writing!

started sucking cocks in my ieens mow at 80 years istill love a cock in my mouth and filling it cum cum cum

Loved the way the story flowed and just the dynamics of the characters. I do hope more is to follow because this story was wonderfully written.

J.S.

This is a very nice story, erotic but at the same time inspiring I can really imagine it, the scenes and the sounds :) good job

lovely story well written and very moving

its nice to have a story ,instead of just two guys fucking,it would be nice if in this story the two guys get to gether for a long term thing...as a gay man in a long friendship with my partner who i love more with each passing day...it makes me feel better to know that there are other guys out there thinking the same as me...this story moved me.i loved it...please write a follow up....jonathan....lancashire....uk...

We both enjoyed it like Jonathan did, agreed that the sex came at the appropriate time, NOT TOO QUICK, but left us wondering, What did Dan do when he saw the note? PLEASE continue this marvelous story. Douglas & Lawrence CO

Well, lead us to the cliff, and then disappear. Well, when is the next chapter, after all this is cruel and unusual punishment if this story is not finished. What went thru Dan's mind when he read the note? Will he respond? Will there be any future for these two? All sorts of questions, and NO answers. PLEASE continue. Douglas & Lawrence

Very nicely done. Enjoyed the smooth transition of the story without abruptly jumping into "the wild sex scene " . Hope you write more stories like this one. Longer stories would be good. Have read this story a few times and still enjoy it. Hope to see more in the future. Thanks!

Excellent writing. I kept a hard on for most of the story. Thanks.