Getting better as they get used to each other. You seem to be relaxing along with them!
And the grammar and text were much better - well done!
Lukas
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Anonymous08/29/05
good story
that was very good story and nice erotic hopfully put ch. 04 thanks. crh
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Anonymous10/07/05
Doing better
You're writing is improving. Keep editing as you write and don't be afraid to ask for editing help from someone you trust.
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Anonymous02/03/07
Got my pussy all wet!
But then I'm a nasty, insestuous little cunt who especially likes to fuck her oldest brother! Never had Daddy, but have had a nephew and an uncle... trying to snare one particular cousin..... and on it goes.
Loved your story!!!!
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Anonymous05/13/08
I need daddy-little girl nudge
Since I entered middle-age I have been "approached" often by young women about 18-24 concerning a daddy-little girl relationship. I have resisted. I am not shy in other ways about sex and intimacy and experimentation. But this taboo I have restrained from trying. Now I dream of a couple of the young women who have been rather persistent, and I've had even an explicit suggestion as to what we might do. Any help getting over this hesitancy would be appreciated.
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Anonymous07/22/08
Steady Onward!
It just keeps getting better; and so does your writing! You are improving by leaps and bounds, and are obviously a quick study. You know the old saying: "Practice makes perfect"?, well, you are proof!
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Anonymous07/22/08
To:"Nudge Needer"
GO FOR IT! Look: It isn't like these "young ladies" are your "real" daughters! and you aren't their "real" father! So what's the harm?! All they really want is for someone to help them indulge a fantasy or two, and they chose you. (You lucky bastard!) So if you care at all for these women, you'll "help" them. If you are not so inclined, pleeeeeease, send them my way, and I'll be delighted to help "my little girl" in any way she wishes! By the by, I'm 42, if that's "old" enough for them.
English
Break 03
Getting better as they get used to each other. You seem to be relaxing along with them!
And the grammar and text were much better - well done!
Lukas
good story
that was very good story and nice erotic hopfully put ch. 04 thanks. crh
Doing better
You're writing is improving. Keep editing as you write and don't be afraid to ask for editing help from someone you trust.
Got my pussy all wet!
But then I'm a nasty, insestuous little cunt who especially likes to fuck her oldest brother! Never had Daddy, but have had a nephew and an uncle... trying to snare one particular cousin..... and on it goes.
Loved your story!!!!
I need daddy-little girl nudge
Since I entered middle-age I have been "approached" often by young women about 18-24 concerning a daddy-little girl relationship. I have resisted. I am not shy in other ways about sex and intimacy and experimentation. But this taboo I have restrained from trying. Now I dream of a couple of the young women who have been rather persistent, and I've had even an explicit suggestion as to what we might do. Any help getting over this hesitancy would be appreciated.
Steady Onward!
It just keeps getting better; and so does your writing! You are improving by leaps and bounds, and are obviously a quick study. You know the old saying: "Practice makes perfect"?, well, you are proof!
To:"Nudge Needer"
GO FOR IT! Look: It isn't like these "young ladies" are your "real" daughters! and you aren't their "real" father! So what's the harm?! All they really want is for someone to help them indulge a fantasy or two, and they chose you. (You lucky bastard!) So if you care at all for these women, you'll "help" them. If you are not so inclined, pleeeeeease, send them my way, and I'll be delighted to help "my little girl" in any way she wishes! By the by, I'm 42, if that's "old" enough for them.
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