Great story by another great author. Keep up the good work!
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Anonymous09/03/05
Great Story
Excellent story, well written. I especially like it when an author keeps it to one or two "pages" and the story is complete, not awaiting more chapters.
by
Anonymous09/04/05
Not much effort
Short and not worth spending the time reading... if you don't want to put more than 10 minutes into writing a story I don't understand why you bother posting it...
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Great
Great story by another great author. Keep up the good work!
Great Story
Excellent story, well written. I especially like it when an author keeps it to one or two "pages" and the story is complete, not awaiting more chapters.
Not much effort
Short and not worth spending the time reading... if you don't want to put more than 10 minutes into writing a story I don't understand why you bother posting it...
Another great story
Great story Lily - loved the urgency and desire, it really came over well. More soon?
wish i was that younger man
god lily your stories turn me on. its a shame i'm 3000 miles away because i would love a weekend with my favorite author ; )
you're favorite younger man
Amazing
I can only pray this actually happened
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