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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz08/24/05

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Wonderful!
A most pleasant read;
can feel this man
taking your breath away
and leaving you
speechless...

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by Tathagata08/24/05

those last

few lines say so much in a very clear simple way.
Nicely done

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by RhymeFairy08/24/05

Dreamy~

I like this poem.
It has a very dreamy ... untouched
quality to it. Very romantic,
and light.

More Please ~

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