All Comments on 'Two Monarchs Flew'

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I feel deprived;

it's at least a "5"

A vivid picture here painted

of your Monarchs soaring overhead...

"I read the trails they left in the air

sometimes confused.... "

perfect description.

Get an illustrator and make this into a children's book.

I am not kidding. Go do it. what are you waiting for?Chop chop before my kids get too old.

~annaswirls

natures contrast with our own, this poem is not the traditional style of sandspike <grin> but still had the spice that made this a very nice poem.

just because this inspired my little metaphor...and it was about butterflies..and besides blue...thats one of my favorite things..smile oh and *agrin* just back at you...

i loved your context, use of word, and the word structure itself, i found myself, somewhere between toes dipped in sand, and open fields awaiting dreams.. (just leavin my peaches) *winks*