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Sweet~
Very sweet ... soft love.
A poem that is formatted
to read like an erotic story.
With a lil editing will be great ~!!!
Love the sentiments and wording here !!
More Please ~
You're a mind reader
Sue:
This Horny 'ol Sailor read your poem and deep in my heart I knew that those are the words my wife would have used if she were of a poetic bent. Thank You. Ronnie Wachuka.
Evokes Memories!
Nothing has perhaps evoked the memories of sea-going days more than this beautiful poem. As long as men go down to the ships and the women left behind wave goodbye this poem will be relevant. Beautiful in its sweetness!
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From time's distant past she has been so standing
Waving to her sailor man as he travels again on the sea.
Very Evocative
Beautiful visuals Sue, thank you so much. I'm not a critic, I either like it or I don't and this poem I love.
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