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I always love your poems because you manage to the get to the heart so easily. I know exactly what you mean, even in your brevity. Excellent as always.
Shadows ... Shell
Wow another short, home run ~!!!
I love the wording you have used. Paints a picture of remorse and regret. I hope this is not the case my friend, for we value your writing and friendship here.
Love this poem of the shadows shell. Ya know, all it takes is to STEP out of the shadow into the full sun of life. Just have faith and all shall work out, if it tis your desire. Just me ~
Wonderful poem !!
have read
other such words formed a bit different but, the message is still potent...blue
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Cheer up!
Perhaps the next narrative following your poem could be: Cheer Up! Compared with what's coming up you are now in great condition... mmm, nothing can cheer me up better than some fine tuned dark humor!
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