All Comments on 'Shudder - The College Years Ch. 09'

Hi Kripto,

Thanks for finishing this chapter of your saga. I thought something had happened that was preventing you from finishing, but you clearly had a number of moving parts you needed to fit into place.

None of your stories have let us down and the intertwining of them is genius.

I look forward to the next chapter when you get to it and hopefully many more to come

PW

Loved this arc. Excellent character development. It’s especially interesting how you turned Nevyn from an unquestioned bad guy to a guy you could almost find yourself feeling sorry for. The morality dip of the twins, coupled with Nevyn being shut out, helped make his descent into being a bad guy seem more of understandable.

Can’t wait for the next arc.

Well I guess this is where we part with Derek and Aubrey, and many other characters of Shudder. It seems so long ago that I stumbled across Shudder while searching for a good body hopping story, but it was quite an adventure you created, and an outstanding story as well! It has been a long time since the last chapter, but the ending is worth the wait. Not quite a happy ending to the siblings, but an excellent ending nevertheless.

As for the mirror, that's a nice nod to Capture Reflections. I really like the fact that all of your creations are connected in a way, existing in a same universe! Looking forward to more stories from you, especially about that mirror in the future, and I hope you are doing well in the real world!

Truly great series

Awesome story! I was wondering in the end how Nevyn was going to get his power back. I wanted to see more about Nancy's escapades though before he did that. Any chance of doing a spinoff with her?

In the final arc there will be more than one flashback that will fill in some of the gaps, especially for Nancy. I alluded to it but it will serve as a bit of a plot point in the last story.

Any idea when you’ll create the story of the next arc? I need more!

Hi Kripto, hope everything is good with you.

Just wondering if you had an update on the next chapter at all please?

Before I began the final arc, I felt the need to introduce a new character and his backstory that will converge in the final story. At present, it's at least three chapters long, but I have not submitted it yet because I have not had the time to edit it. I hope to finish it soon and submit it all at once, and then begin the final arc. Sorry for the wait. I hope you find it worth it.

I just love all that you have written and can’t wait to see what’s next. I’ve never been that often on a page just to see if you published something new either. I trust you to make it forth the wait !

It was an interesting adventure but it got a bit more disappointing towards the end, Derek after all that didnt share any connection to Nevyn who got slight development but nothing ajor, the character seemed to water down only to lust and lack of awareness of their flaws. Was hoping for some reconciliation between these two

Hoping for an ending that isint low brow just bad guy bad because bad and good guys wins...

I can't wait to read the final arc !