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Welcome to Temptation Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by tdelain6908/30/05

HHHHHHOOOOOOOTTTTTTT

I do hope there is more to come of this adventure, especially in a town named "Tempation!.

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by Anonymous08/31/05

Just.....

... great. Young love, young lovers - forbidden, but beautiful.
And not even in Temptation? Whatever's in store??
More - please!
Lukas

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by Anonymous01/29/06

HOTT

thought it was a little too bro and sis love then actually the desire to fuck the hell out of her. BUt it made me cum..

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by oldwayne10/16/09

Five Stars!

I really enjoyed your story, cf. I hope you will take it further.

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by Anonymous03/08/11

Wow

Wow!

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by Anonymous02/15/12

another wannabe writer

if you aren't going to finish the story don't start in the first place. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR AND FINISH WHAT YOU START IN A TIMELY MANNER. NOW EITHER FINISH OR DELETE ALL STORIES AND NEVER POST AGAIN IT IS CRIMINAL TO LEAVE A STORY IN THIS CONDITION.

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by Oleguy02/02/14

Nice conclusion. But !

As I have seen so often :-
"into me inch by inch"
My reference book must be wrong as it claims the Hymen is at the outer limits of the vagina.

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