All Comments on 'Underwear Shopping'

by jdodg

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Erotic

Loved the whole scenario.

One error in the writing. I think you mixed up Debbie with Alex right before Debbie went in to put her lingerie on. Alex was talking to the narrator and staying in the white basque while Debbie was putting the last outfit on. Check it out & see how you read it.

Otherwise, superb.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The story would have been mor appealing if it was.the wife and the shop assistant. It just seems like another story of betrayal.

mfj77mfj772 months ago

Various sequels could have been written. Wife could have visited the underwear store and wound up in a three-way which could eventually lead to a four-way with hubby.

In any event, the author seems long gone ;-( which is too bad. I liked his style. Quick and fun stories all. One name mix-up mentioned in other comment was a bit distracting but could be easily overlooked.

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