All Comments on 'New Moon Pt. 07'

by GrimmsOtherBrother

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turtledoveturtledoveover 18 years ago
Wonderful!

Another wonderful chapter---You had me on the edge of my seat! Please--don't stop now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very nice!

Amazing srory from beginning to now!

Just hope it's not over yet!

MoonharpMoonharpover 18 years ago
Unbelievable!

This is one of the most unbelievable series on Literotica - I have rarely enjoyed something quiet as much... man, I am hanging on your every word.

Keep the amazing job up, and can't wait for more,

Moonharp

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
wow

SIMPLY THE BEST

KEEP IT UP!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
woooooooooooooooo

I've not read such a good story in ages. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
cant wait for the next one

i liked all of them so far i hope the next one is good. I want to know what happened to the sister and dad cause you only mention the dad in the first one and the sister only a couple times

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WHOA!

Its been two years almost three, please right chapter 8. please!

jocker77jocker77about 15 years ago
One of the greatest

I am sad that this great writer stopped writing more of his fantasy.Damn it :-(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Can't believe it ended like this, was so diligent in reading to the end, but it broke my heart to see it had ended without answering all my questions. The most intriguing story I've read on here and I've ben reading the stories for years. A very talented writer, who takes me away from reality and places me right where its all happening.....mind you I was the Goddess Diana Bickers....I would play no other part. Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. Please spoil us some more with your sweet work....I think I love you :0

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
finish it please:)

wow that was hottt:) the story line is so creative. i loved it, is there any chance of u finishing it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
It's been soooo long

I have read this story over and over. I believe that it's time to finish it. I wonder what ever happened to the sister, did she become infected too? Does the father ever come back to find the ruins of his family? These are just my thoughts

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
woow

Just great. Please keep writting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
already addicted

It's been almost five years, but I need more after reading this. You have two of my big three fetishes here (incest and impregnation), and it's so hot that I think I'm developing something for werewolf's as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Its really to bad that

the author never continued this series.

jocker77jocker77over 13 years ago
Hope the author is still lurking somewhere

Because i would like to pay to get this story to continue but so far no response.At least to give permission to expand the story with another author.

The best story i read.

redrose_nikkiredrose_nikkiover 13 years ago
WOW

This story is my favorite!!!Wonderful,so hot.

Thank you,please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
For those who love this story....a note from Grimm'sOtherBrother

I am so sorry I have been away for so long. Life intervenes but I am hoping to start writing again on this and many other stories very soon. If you would like to contact me please touch base at: porthos1620@yahoo.com

Take care and hope to hear from my fans soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I really,really,

Really hope its not over.It is more than a story, it is actually a masterpiece.

redrose_nikkiredrose_nikkiabout 13 years ago
The mail is there

So you can write to GrimmsOtherBrother if you want to send kudos or ideas.

Dvus_DDvus_Dabout 13 years ago
Amazing!

I love this series. Just read it all the way through for the second time and it's so incredibly hot. I can't wait for more.

JemezJemezalmost 13 years ago
More is there another chapter?

Great writing!! When does he transform himself? He did partake in the forbidden fruit?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Troll !!!

You all believed that anonymous porthos1620 is GrimmmsOtherBrother ?!

LOL, the author died in a car crash, don't feed the troll. The real GOB would use his own nickname not anonymous.

TROLL!!

RANT OVER.

JemezJemezalmost 13 years ago
Contest

If the author is deceased I am very sad to hear it. However we should have a contest and write the final chapter and see who comes close to the spirit of the series. Anyone interested?

redrose_nikkiredrose_nikkialmost 13 years ago
Grimm

I contacted porthos person claiming to be Grimm and honestly believed that he is the author of New Moon. If that is not the case then shame on him.

He is not responding to emails so it could be true that he's a liar.

I would LOVE to see more New Moon. Is any other author interested in the work?

Anybody knows of a good author that might be interested?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
excellent

years have passed since you wrote. i feel a little like this is a post that wont find eyes to see it, but i could not help but say this was a good story, even if years to late.

Rumor has it that Grimm is dead...i don't know how any of us web readers would really know that, but if true i feel a loss. and with that i say stop being a lazy ghost and start typing up a ending. I mean Tupac has been gone for years and still is making albums.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Return

If Batman can do it, so can you! Start writing more New Moon, man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story!

i just whant to say that this is an outstanding story! to bad it is not finished or continued. when the author is still out there and willing:

PLEASE write more chapters!

i know a lot of people, including me of course, would be VERY happy to read the sequel of James and his fight or maybe lost against the hell or heaven of werewolve lust.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
too bad you stopped !

You could write other stories like this, you have lots of style !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It was okay

I didn't like the ending really, it feels like I read half a story. I read it in Johnny Depps voice, which made the whole thing funny. You probably won't read this since you wrote this 10 years ago. haha

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
The saddest thing of all is this unfinished story!!!

Reading all of the previous comments I see the writer was killed in an auto accident, thus the unfinished story. This story by far is the best werewolf story that I have ever read. The torment of James watching his sweet, kind, and loving Mother into into something cruel and caluste driven only by lust and the passion of the instinct to breed. I hope more of Becka's ultimate fate would have been included in further chapters as this my only complaint about this wonderful story. What I love about this story is James's torment of watching his sweet, kind, and loving Mother transform into someone cold,cruel, and callous drinven only by the instinct to breed. Diane's brainwashing of Jacob to be his Mother's stub is well done. I think originally James was to be Diane's but that appeared to change somewhat or never was really explored as the story progressed. You think she would have went after James at the story's end where Dani made her complete transformation into a werewolf and wanted Jacob as her mate and to breed her. Another question mark in the story is did James breed Diana that day at her house when she seduced him? She inferred in what she said to him that he had. So here we have one queen bred and the other soon to be bred by her youngest son. Their pregnancies and birth of their pups would make a stand alone chapter. Another chapter would be the the final fates of Becka and James and who in the end infected each of them. After being infected were they allowed to return to college as they would have been starting their junior year? Retired Army NCO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Further Writing

Has any author written any more to this story? It was a very good series and it would be a shame to let it end like this. It would be great if another author could take up the series and finish the work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I agree with anon

Anyone know if this story continues elsewhere by another author?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Continued?

It seems the original author is long gone. But I wish someone would take it up and finish this story. I’d love to read the ending.

ChiefHospitalmanChiefHospitalmanabout 3 years ago
Was Chapter 7 Really the Story's True Ending.

Had the writer meant to add another chapter explaining James, Becca, and the father's fates? Or did he intend the story to end the way it did with Danielle completing her transformation into a werewolf? I read in the comment section that he was killed in an auto accident. So we will never know if he intended the story to end the way it did or he intended to write another chapter explaining the fates of James, Becca, and their father's fates. If he did intend the story to end the way it did it reminds me of the famous short story "The Lady or the Tiger" where the reader gets to decide the man's fate.

Garg22Garg225 months ago

Man I remember reading this back on Jafar's site. Reread it to get a blast from the past.

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