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Absent From My Life

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by Anonymous

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by J.Doe08/28/05

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Good ideas in this poem, but don't be afraid to put yourself in your words by using the word "I" instead of avoiding it.

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by LeBroz08/29/05

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Very well done;
your words and the rhythm, so hollow;
echoing the feelings inside, so empty;
loss resonates.

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by duddle14601/15/07

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Love's departed ~ desolation fills my life.

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