All Comments on 'Between Friends Ch. 01'

This is the way to tell a true story. The photos scattered through it while reading give a great image of the story. Really helps with the excitement and I was rock hard by the end of it. Anticiapating what each new photo would bring is what makes it so HOT and as if I was there watching with you. Can't wait to hear and see what happens next. Thanks, Tommie

So was I rock hard whilst reading this, especially on seeing the accompanying photos. I look forward to the continuation, but I wonder - can I volunteer to be a referee at the next encounter?

Poor story, photos so fake it is not true. Erotic content ZERO! If this is your best, GIVE UP NOW and save us from more total "SHITE"

3/10 for effort only!

AND THAT IS BEING KIND!

I must point out in respect of the first comment

the word is SHIT not shyte, if you are going to swear in English say it right.

Great first story liked the photo's with captions cant wait to hear more

If you are going to include illustrations with a story like this, and the violence is all too relevant, perhaps the story would have been much more erotic if the models used had been completely naked?

was good story and pics, need them cleared up some, but all in all, a very good story and look foward to seeing more stories like this. 9 out of 10 stars

How pathetic was the comment from "Anonymous" in England. If he cannot make any criticism other than what he wrote why did he bother to read it in the first place? (Or is it that he is unable to read?) He asks you not to write any more "shyte". That is because he is probably too full of it himself.

awesome. keep it coming.

I liked this story ! It was hot and very creative !!

just didn't like the pics

I thought it was very creative and a good length, the pictures could have been a bit more erotic but other than that amazing

9/10 STARS =)

this sucked

awesome photos lovely script wish I had been there maybe a little more nudity and of the 2 girls wrestling

I enjoyed it, especially the photos. Nice looking women. I hope you'll continue writing and illustrating. I'm a big fan of erotic wrestling