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by My Erotic Tale08/28/05

nice write sand~

we each sprout wings from birth and soar different space and time yet one day may land perched next to another on a flight and share wisdom and.....poetry

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by J.Doe08/28/05

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The puncuation in poem is a bit distracting to me, but nevertheless, I enjoyed it. New imagery, fresh metaphor.

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by Anonymous08/28/05

sound like

a master helmsman steering the winds of thought..vivid images that flowed ever so smooth..blue

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by RhymeFairy08/30/05

Sanity taken ~

I love this epic lil write of time,
and space. I can feel your urgency
to plant roots before it all unravels.
Just me, love it Sand.

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