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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz08/29/05

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A nice soft morning wake-up call.

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by SensualMale09/04/05

Very nice!

Gotta love waking up to the scent of a steamy sensual night and taking it again from there ;)

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by logophile09/05/05

lovely

Direct and sincere and so very sexy. Nicely done, Moonie!

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by Anonymous10/11/05

passion

truly embodied so much passion....
it captured it with nice elegance and go movement throughout the poem.
very very hot.


***let's act it out!***

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by Honey12310/17/05

Lovely

Such sensual images you created with your words!

~Honey

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by Belegon12/10/05

Well-Captured

...that moment of awakening, ezpecially if you awaken before your lover, after a special night is both wonderfully romantic and erotic.

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by fairysong12/16/05

Just wow!

your words painted that moment of awakening, of passion and heat. I could close my eyes and feel your words. Once again, lovely work.
~Tink

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by CeriseNoire05/16/07

Love the imagery

Suck vivid images of a sensual moment. They create such a nice mood.

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