All Comments on 'It Was Her Mom's Idea!'

by Alex De Kok

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vladimirvladimirover 18 years ago
Like good chess or cards

you only get good at it if you play with good players. :-)

Nicely rendered..

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Story

Tender enough to be believeable hot enough to likeable..Good story and descrip....A 10!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice!

Short -- Sweet -- Hard to beat.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good Job.

Good job. Short, but sweet and a real nice read. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Making Love

It has always been that when making love it is soft and tender and that is the way it should be. Great read and keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice read

Alex - charming story. How much heathier our sex lives would be with a good launch like she had.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Loved it

Loved it.........thats all I can say. ; ) It was sweet and hot, all at the same time. I wish my first time had been like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sorry.....

... I can only give it a 5 - and 100%

Just keep writing this stuff - I don't care how much it makes my cock ache!

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Warm and wonderful

A very nice story. Please continue writing . I liked the fact that he treated her with love and compassion.

TongueDocAtWorkTongueDocAtWorkover 18 years ago
Hot blood and pulsing cock...you did the work!

Great story...It sure made my cock hard...wanted to be the one breaking the cherry...Keep writing...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What, no rubber?????

Lovely, sweet, sexy story....but, my hot and horny Alex, even if a girl is on the pill, boys should always wear rubbers!!!!

NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
You still have the touch!

Alex, It still is good , if the byline is yours!

Keep 'em coming!

John

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinover 18 years ago
WOW!

Hot AND sensitive! What a wonderful story! Encore, Maestro! Encore!

hoppymanhoppymanover 18 years ago
CONTINUE?

Is this only party 1, I hope? Thank you for writing.

aNAUGHTYgranny4uaNAUGHTYgranny4uover 18 years ago
Needs protection from Aids as well as pregnancy

Only gave you a 75 because of the mention that rubbers are not needed. In this day and age everyone (especially the young and innocent) need to be protected from aids. The story otherwise was great -- keep up the good work.

kydreamrkydreamrover 18 years ago
Very fine story

Sweet, straight to the point without being crass. I really liked it and hope to read more of their relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I wanna live on her other side

ever man wants a neighbor like that

sherlock40sherlock40over 18 years ago
Very nice story

This guy is one of the luckiest guys on the planet. He should get even closer to the mom so he can be there when the daughter comes home on breaks.

Jenny6969Jenny6969over 17 years ago
Sweet

Reminds me of a certain Good Neighbor I know!. Who wouldn't want their first time to be with such a sweet and caring lover. Mutual satisfaction a bonus!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Superb-story!!

I wait for part 2-3-4-5!!!

LoisleelewisLoisleelewisover 16 years ago

I loved it. Reminded me of some of my early days. Good story, and excellent pace. How about another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow

Every man's dream.

And well written.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 12 years ago
Loved it.

Thank you, sir ...

ChucksSiteChucksSiteabout 12 years ago
"Can we do it again?"

I like that plea, and it is the one that seems to have eluded me. Wish I was that good that I'd hear those words. The story was mostly believable but, do moms really start their daughters on the pill before they leave for college? I know this is erotic fiction, but do they? And, I meant to comment on other stories and this one about unprotected sex - and I see that others beat me to it. With the tremendous rise in STDs, it is probably appropriate to put rubbers/condoms on the male even in stories or put a comment in your forward warning about safe sex. Otherwise I like your style, Alex, as the males are usually considerate of the female, getting them wet and ready before plowing in. At least in your stories, that brings the female to climax fairly soon and roughly with the male, a nice, but normally unlikely touch. But your stories "work" and are fun to read. So, please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

Wish some1 like this mother and daughter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Affectionate and sexy

Would love to read Chapter 2... When they continue over the summer before she goes away to school

HayboysHayboysabout 2 years ago

Right get the Chinese delivered finished and let’s have round Two , Three and four and why not Round Five a great story but has so much more scope to expand the story both on this night and beyond this first night of passion there are so many ways you could take this story maybe even sandwiching mum in there somewhere somehow

acupacup10 months ago

Short. Good, but short.

Campus77Campus77about 2 months ago

A nice little tale. More believable as the same thing happened to me. Oddly, several years later I married her.

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July 13, 2023 - As some of you have no doubt realised, I'm writing again, albeit very slowly. My late wife was a writer as well, although not on Literotica, and I think she would have wanted me to continue. May 24, 2021 - I haven't posted anything for some time now, and it ma...