by Alex De Kok
you only get good at it if you play with good players. :-)
Nicely rendered..
Tender enough to be believeable hot enough to likeable..Good story and descrip....A 10!
It has always been that when making love it is soft and tender and that is the way it should be. Great read and keep it coming.
Alex - charming story. How much heathier our sex lives would be with a good launch like she had.
Loved it.........thats all I can say. ; ) It was sweet and hot, all at the same time. I wish my first time had been like that.
... I can only give it a 5 - and 100%
Just keep writing this stuff - I don't care how much it makes my cock ache!
Lukas
A very nice story. Please continue writing . I liked the fact that he treated her with love and compassion.
Great story...It sure made my cock hard...wanted to be the one breaking the cherry...Keep writing...
Lovely, sweet, sexy story....but, my hot and horny Alex, even if a girl is on the pill, boys should always wear rubbers!!!!
Alex, It still is good , if the byline is yours!
Keep 'em coming!
John
Only gave you a 75 because of the mention that rubbers are not needed. In this day and age everyone (especially the young and innocent) need to be protected from aids. The story otherwise was great -- keep up the good work.
Sweet, straight to the point without being crass. I really liked it and hope to read more of their relationship.
This guy is one of the luckiest guys on the planet. He should get even closer to the mom so he can be there when the daughter comes home on breaks.
Reminds me of a certain Good Neighbor I know!. Who wouldn't want their first time to be with such a sweet and caring lover. Mutual satisfaction a bonus!
I loved it. Reminded me of some of my early days. Good story, and excellent pace. How about another chapter?
I like that plea, and it is the one that seems to have eluded me. Wish I was that good that I'd hear those words. The story was mostly believable but, do moms really start their daughters on the pill before they leave for college? I know this is erotic fiction, but do they? And, I meant to comment on other stories and this one about unprotected sex - and I see that others beat me to it. With the tremendous rise in STDs, it is probably appropriate to put rubbers/condoms on the male even in stories or put a comment in your forward warning about safe sex. Otherwise I like your style, Alex, as the males are usually considerate of the female, getting them wet and ready before plowing in. At least in your stories, that brings the female to climax fairly soon and roughly with the male, a nice, but normally unlikely touch. But your stories "work" and are fun to read. So, please write more.
Would love to read Chapter 2... When they continue over the summer before she goes away to school
Right get the Chinese delivered finished and let’s have round Two , Three and four and why not Round Five a great story but has so much more scope to expand the story both on this night and beyond this first night of passion there are so many ways you could take this story maybe even sandwiching mum in there somewhere somehow
A nice little tale. More believable as the same thing happened to me. Oddly, several years later I married her.