Jeff Fucked Me

let jeff fuck you too

are all the writer faggot on this site.

Worthless

Poor story, poor writing, totally the wrong catagory. Not worth the time it takes to read.

Don't listen to them....this was hot!

Don't listen to the critics (i.e.: homophobes). This is a hot fantasy for many guys. I loved it.

Awesome!

I loved it, ignore the loser comments. Please continue!!!

Very hot story

Very exciting. I like the step by step dialog.

Ignore the negative creeps. Remember:
Those that can, do:
those that can't,write;
those that can't write, criticize.

Splendid!

Excellent. Touched all my buttons. Thank you.

normally,

i just don't even read het stories. but this turned me on incredibly.
i love the way it was written almost entirely in dialog. and fuck, i love the cum eating he does. that's great.
too bad jeff didn't come back over, and fuck him good too.

Another sad sad man and marriage

He might as well leave now, he's a cuckold and will always be one now. Sad man, whore wife, sad and destroyed marriage. Sooner or latrer it will end. I hate wimps for husbands!

I have just figured all this out!

Most of the folks on this site either don't like marriage, have no conception what marriage is or have a really fucked up self image! Anyway, on to the story:

From a story telling standpoint, this was exceptionally well done. The author allowed the people to TELL the story. I loved this! No needless description, no fruitless ploys. Great writing!

Subject matter sucked though and it didn't go where I wanted, the people didn't do what I wanted them to do, the man didn't shoot the "lying, cheating whore slut", the woman wasn't sorry (like they are in "real life"? Yeah, right!), the man was low self-esteem pussy, on and on. But it seems from the comments, most guys here like that thing. OR, conversely, he didn't shoot her and Jeff, ruin his life and his families, but BY GOD no woman was gonna cheat on him and get away with it! LOL!

Keep up the writing. You have ability and that is almost a priceless comodity here! :-)

Regards
C

Fabulous

Pay no attention to the immature fucks who've left their homophobic comments. Great story, good job of building intensity and delivery of erotic moment between husband and wife.

Very disappointing.

I truly thought the husband was trying to pull a full confession out of her, and tricking her out of her clothes, before kicking her out. The next logical step would then have been to call a lawyer and sue Jeff. So, quite a dissapointing same-ol-same-ol ending.

Gee This Is A Man Worth Having Children With!

Oh, you probably thought I meant her husband - NAH - he is only good for sucking stringy lumpy cum from her stretched out swollen red cunt and raising bastard children as espoused by the pitiful supporters of your sick words.

Talented writer - yes - but begs the question why such disgusting subhuman wife whore and self cuckolding almost a pimp sicko's as the plot? Isn't this an erotic site!

So do we root for the sadistic depraved wife whore or big cocked Jeff (black?) as obviously some readers already want to stand in for the humiliated pitiful wimp almost a man.

How jaded does one have to be 1) to write this perversion 2) be excited by it?

Such a waste of talent and lack of reality. Wash real good guys!

The build up was good...

...very very good. I can't help but feel sorry for the husband though.

100% isn't enough. How about 1,000?

Wish I could write that well. This is one of the better stories in recent months.
I liked the way he accepted his wife's enthusiasm for Jeff's abnormally large cock, and her being the most recent raw meat for it's pleasure. And I liked his willingness to participate by eating her out. Eating to avoid pregnacy is sort of far out, though. Anyway it is just fiction, so what.
What I don't like is those 'gentlemen' who sound as they read every story in this sex crazy collection, then pompously call cockoldry immoral. What about all the other even more way out categories? Are they acceptable in polite society? How about incest, cheating, rape, dogs, horses, scat, snuff, homosexuality for example. How about the few stories of ladies gathering socially to relieve 'volunteer' guys of a combination of their testicles and cocks, then preparing these privates in the kitchen and eating the resulting goodies while the victim guys watch? Do these jerks cum profusely at these 'OK' stories?

They are the perverts. They have no sense of living, and let live. Just self important, low end jerks like our president.

I do agree with one of their peeves: Cuckoldry/hot wife stories really deserve their own category in Literotica!

Nice dialogue!

I like the conversation between the two. Certainly worthy of a follow up story!

Wow

This is ,,or could have been a nice story. But she cheats and he ,,, well what about hubby

Good, but could have been better

If she is not on the Pill, and Jeff just left before you got home, after fucking her and shooting his sperm into her, chances are that his sperm was already fertilizing one of her eggs, so any sucking of his cum out of her would not have stopped a pregnancy with Jeff.
This story needs a little common sensed thinking and truthful story-telling.

100%

100%

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Humans lowered to the lowest - Yak!

And in this corner

we have a woman who will deball any husband her keypad can create - demean him - pitifully disrespect him repeatedly and the fool - the writers braindead male stooge like the pink bunny keeps licking up others hemungus cock cum from her enlarged red stretched out cave type cunt.

So tune in next while she defiles the wimps who like this cuckolding deviant shit she spews without human convention - little sick one get some help soon so the people around you don't find out your scummy male demeaning preoccupation!!

great skill

It's a classic story of humiliation of the male ego and excitement which comes from that. Like all stories of infidility it is both exciting, because of the taboo, and heart-wrenching. The taboo-topics are the most truly exciting in the sexual sense.

Good skill and I hope it wasn't true

The grass is always greener.

A idiot mentally ill woman who can not control herself, taking medical risk with her body and therefore with her husbands body. And a man to stupid to know he lives with a piece of trash that has no will power, no self respect, no morals, and no ethics.

I agree the woman is mentally ill!

But the supposed husband is even more so. Hope they enjoy their days of AIDS, safe, sane, consensual is the only way. It is obvious she only wants her husband to keep her home nothing more.

Heh

You only needed 10"-11" to make your story erotic. That's sad.

narrated good

i did like the authors narration but it was too straight

Fucked is Right

The 2005 comments were either love or hate it. Someone even got it right about the writers on this site. Most seem to hate marriage and all relationships are based on what the woman wants. The readership changed with the 2007 comments, maybe that is why you haven't written in three years. I read it and wish I had stopped. At least this writer doesn't whine as much as BOSTONFICTIONWRITE does.

Excellent Story!

For someone who has been married to a woman for just over ten years who really does have lovers- and who has taken their sperm into her body unprotected quite often after she had her first affair behind my back and I not only stayed with her and agreed to raise the baby as my own when she informed me she was pregnant by a lover I didn't even know she had, and our other two children might possibly have been fathered by other men whe was with or possibly me- this type of story rings quite true and- Believe IT OR NOT- actually has become a turnon to me.
Please write more.

that's sick

this is a sick story... the only slightly exciting part is jeff seducing the wife with his big cock. All others like the husband licking the cum and such, is a real TURN-OFF.

honesty

A shame more wives don't have the same attitude - the only improvement would have been lipstick smeared on her husband's lips before he started sucking and more his cock while he sucked her to heaven.

Fab story

Interesting story - probably more fantasy but hey I liked it

Really sick!!

I can't believe that there are writers that want to write sickass shit like this story!

great story

OMG, this is a dream cum true for me, i have been asking my wife to cum home full of cum so i can suck her clean. it is like you were in one of my dreams and you wrote it down.
i would so love to find my wife's pussy plastered wife cum from somebody else and then she MAKES me clean her cunt. i ask her almost evertime we fuck to make me clean her, not to ask me to, but to make me clean it, sit on my face and tell me about her full pussy.
i hope you writemore stories like this and make them longer so i can really get a good tug while reading.
thanks.
n

Been there, done that!

My husband and I are all over you girlfriend. We had a similar experience with another friend. What a great fuck session we had. It has made our marriage100% more exciting and closer. For all you couples who are squeamish about trying this, do so. You will not be sorry!

OMG there are some really fucked up morons

on this site. Prime example, Anon-100% is not enough. This guy is a fruitcake who belongs in an asylum. Even mentions the president, talk about disrespect to others. Just one of many morons who cruise this site looking for sick fetishes. Author you are as sick as those that praise you. Put this trash into fetish where it belongs.

This is really a sickass story with a real screwed up hubby that rates a ten on the wimp-o-meter along with a story rating about a ten on my shit-o-meter.

she didnt want her husband to fuck her because if she was pregnant she wanted to know who the father was thats all.

loved it

this story is fucking hot. thank you!

Storyline???????

CRAP!!

right category

this story is in the right category. i don't understand why people think it isn't. this type of story is exactly what belongs in loving wives, its been that way since the site first came online.

jeffs the man

nothing like having sex with your wife after she has just been long cocked and cream pied. a wonderful expeieince every one should try if they are man enough to get thru the aftermath. better knowing than wondering, can't remimber how many wives i have slept around with over the years, so man up and enjoy.

Great Cuck story

A VERY HOT cuck story of a sexy wife telling her husband how she just got fucked so well and he loved every minute of it! Nice!

fag

any body who suck an other man 's cum is a fuking fag !!!!!

telling her to get out

I would be telling her to get out and don't come back. As for the other guy well breaking his leggs and making him a unik would be good justise

Welcome

Welcome to your new life! You will probably adjust to it in a month or so! You have a great start on your adjustment already, because Sweetie has undergone an instant-enlightenment experience and is helping you along very well! Good you like salty and bitter already, with a hint of musky!
3*

Doesn't deck spell well?

He should comment more to show his ignorance.

NO WAY...OR CHANCE

there will not be a 2 or 3 peat.....GET USED TO IT....TK U MLJ LV NV

nice story

What a understanding husband she has. I guess that is what you call true love and wifey will be shagging old Jeffrey and before you know it she will be pregnant. It was a bit different than other tales as she tells her husband everything and during the course of the conversation he without realizing it now in his wife's mind is allowing this to continue. Well written.

Total bullshit story.

I don't want to fuck you I only want to fuck Jeff. But I love you.

I wonder if she'll say that to hubby after he's finished fuvking some hotter and younger woman?

Sloopy seconds are real and good.

I have been very active in this as my wife has 3 close lovers who have her off and on and then I have sloppy seconds.

sucide is the only way for a cuckold and his whore

not to mention the fucked up writer, you can use my gun