All Comments on 'Student Seduction'

This was an excellent story. I would love to see more in this vein. pierced kisses

lexi

that's all just please write more

Just the sort of story I love. You might like to read mine too - some are sort of up this alley. Keep writing!

I liked your writing style. Believable seduction scene.

really, really good! i really hope there will be a sequel. i want to know what happens in the class. great job, again!

great pace, nice twist

As someone said, believable + not clogged up with tiny detail.

More please.

Very nice introduction of both characters. Through Lara's eyes we get an impression of Bunny that now seems incomplete. There is now a hint that she has more depth and complexity than just a shy, lesbian-curious co-ed. At the same time, Lara seems much more than a tatooed, wife-beater wearing, artist lesbian. You began with two somewhat one-dimensional stereotypes and in day 2 of the story, added intiguing depth.

Bravo! I look forward to more.

I want to meet Lara in the cafe..

You've got to keep going! I've constantly checked in to hear more about Bunny and Lara. Please!

email me I am 19 first year of college and would love some advice on seducing one of my teachers. rengine7@aol.com

You wrote that so that it would have a continuation. And yet you never wrote anthing after this beautiful piece. No in grammar, nicely worded lead in to set up the overture.

Do yourself as well as all your followers and, give us a climax... 5💥's😘😘😘😘😘

I liked this, bar having to force myself past the fact your protagonist smoking. That's a major turn - off for me. I'm glad I read on. Just want to know the next part of the story...

Uh... If "Turning" straight girls lesbian is acceptable then guys trying to turn lesbians straight is okay?

Sexual fluidity can't flow one way that would make the whole idea untrue.

Uh... If "Turning" straight girls lesbian is acceptable then guys trying to turn lesbians straight is okay?

Sexual fluidity can't flow one way that would make the whole idea untrue.

Logic is not part of man hating characteristics.