All have been short, but I think well-done. At least, I have kept on reading, which I have not done with others. They are developed well enough before getting into the action. After all, I don't think you are going for a romantic novel here. Hairy bushes aren't my cup of tea, but if you like them, go for it. By the way, the two subjects I like the most are brother-sister and mother-son, so I look forward to your next submission.
but I've got to say I don't like what's happening now. This is none of dad's damn business! What, he's going to fuck his own daughter now, the old pervert? That's just disgusting. The family cunts, his mom's and his sis's, belong only to the son of the family. In fact, even mom should cut off the old coot. Only one male in the family has a real prick now, the boy's big fat prick. His mother's and his sister's cunts are there for him to unload his young balls into whenever and wherever he feels the urge. There's no room in the family twats for dad's stupid watery discharge, only for the big strong son's great big doses of rich creamy sperm from his heavy young balls.
Ah yes, the death knell for any story good or bad; some indication of a future chapter. "I'm gonna ride that big cock like never before, but in chapter 4, Sis said." We will probably never know what Sis said.
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great
get chapter 4 going can't wait.
excellent work
your chapters are so short
give us more of the stories,they are good read.
Stop The Torture
End This now. It truly stinks.
You get my vote
All have been short, but I think well-done. At least, I have kept on reading, which I have not done with others. They are developed well enough before getting into the action. After all, I don't think you are going for a romantic novel here. Hairy bushes aren't my cup of tea, but if you like them, go for it. By the way, the two subjects I like the most are brother-sister and mother-son, so I look forward to your next submission.
BIG-N-FIRM
IS NOW SOFT-N-LIMP......LAROC OF AGES
the first two parts were really great...
but I've got to say I don't like what's happening now. This is none of dad's damn business! What, he's going to fuck his own daughter now, the old pervert? That's just disgusting. The family cunts, his mom's and his sis's, belong only to the son of the family. In fact, even mom should cut off the old coot. Only one male in the family has a real prick now, the boy's big fat prick. His mother's and his sister's cunts are there for him to unload his young balls into whenever and wherever he feels the urge. There's no room in the family twats for dad's stupid watery discharge, only for the big strong son's great big doses of rich creamy sperm from his heavy young balls.
Chapter 4?
Ah yes, the death knell for any story good or bad; some indication of a future chapter. "I'm gonna ride that big cock like never before, but in chapter 4, Sis said." We will probably never know what Sis said.
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