All Comments on 'Brotherly Love Ch. 02'

Please don't keep me waiting! I love the build-up! I've had this same type of relationship before! It's so hot!! I love it!

this is a good story. Been waiting for over a week for this chapter, can't wait to read the next. Pretty please?

Oh, you're cruel!! This is the sexiest story on literotica in a LONG time and you're making me wait?? Congrats on your super sexy submission.

Please share the rest of the story with us...we are a patient group, but we have our limits!! This is a well-thought out story so far and I am looking forward to the next installments.

omg, this is my life!!!! waiting to see how it works out for them...maybe it will work out the same way for me! (hopefully just as hot ;) )

Holding out on a story about holding out... I love the irony.. hate the wait. You didn't even go for a cheap thrill in the shower when in reality she would have at least touched herself. Mark had better be amazing or we're all going to kill you - don't break our hearts.

Thank you for a lovely story. Their coupling, whenever it happens, could be a very explosive one.

I'm looking forward to the next installment.