All Comments on 'Brotherly Love Ch. 03'

I love how this story is progressing and I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is one of the best stories I've read so far. Keep up the fantastic work!

Love how the story is progressing, a little odd to see him get so mad but ok. Doing very well, very arousing, keep up the good work

Okay, so there are a few grammar issues I'd quibble about, but thus far the story is good. Can't wait till the next installment.

Alex

I am beginning to love the way u write your installments. Not too much but enough to have a reader cumming back for more. Can't wait for the next chapter.

please, write more soon!

wow, i love your writing, do you just write erotica or do you write other stuff as well?

I do like your style though!

This is great writing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us! But don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!!!

I don´t really like you to make the girl seem to be so stupid and it should not take as many chapters as there seem to be to get to a nice ending!

Well, I totally agree with the other reader. It should not take that many chapters to get this story to a happy end and I get so frustrated when once again realising that you women authors give your female characters such stupidity! I like your narrating style but you only get 3 stars because of you hanging on to letting appear your heroine as a childish character!

I'm confused. I read all the chapters and I don't understand a couple of things. First, wtf is wrong with Logan? Is he just a psychopath or what? Second, why has Logan got such a huge problem with Mark?

I went back and read it all again to see if I missed something, I didn't. I understand a slightly protective older brother, but really nailing her bedroom door shut and she is 19, an adult. And then the ending was like dropping off a cliff. Boom, story is done.

Are you planning on continuing the story?