by Myalyn
I love how this story is progressing and I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is one of the best stories I've read so far. Keep up the fantastic work!
Love how the story is progressing, a little odd to see him get so mad but ok. Doing very well, very arousing, keep up the good work
Okay, so there are a few grammar issues I'd quibble about, but thus far the story is good. Can't wait till the next installment.
Alex
I am beginning to love the way u write your installments. Not too much but enough to have a reader cumming back for more. Can't wait for the next chapter.
wow, i love your writing, do you just write erotica or do you write other stuff as well?
This is great writing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us! But don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!!!
I donĀ“t really like you to make the girl seem to be so stupid and it should not take as many chapters as there seem to be to get to a nice ending!
Well, I totally agree with the other reader. It should not take that many chapters to get this story to a happy end and I get so frustrated when once again realising that you women authors give your female characters such stupidity! I like your narrating style but you only get 3 stars because of you hanging on to letting appear your heroine as a childish character!
I'm confused. I read all the chapters and I don't understand a couple of things. First, wtf is wrong with Logan? Is he just a psychopath or what? Second, why has Logan got such a huge problem with Mark?
I went back and read it all again to see if I missed something, I didn't. I understand a slightly protective older brother, but really nailing her bedroom door shut and she is 19, an adult. And then the ending was like dropping off a cliff. Boom, story is done.
Are you planning on continuing the story?