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Hi 5....
This work flowed well to me. So many visuals
came into view. You weaved for thoughtfull poem
in a very clever way. sandspike
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I felt a little wasted reading that. :) Great job, Imp.
Great job
I loved the clever word-play!
Fly
Wasted Indeed
Infuckingcredible!
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Remember that feeling well;
insightful
delightful
but oh the morning after;
no wonder they call it wasted.
Hey...
You're poem gave me a hangover. Not crapola. Kudos.
Haven't a clue
what you could be talking about.
Can I sell you this bridge?
Havin a flashback. Brilliant stuff, imp
Reeling...
from the power and intensity of your words. Nicely done - the images and the alliterations blend so magically here. Brava!
wow!
the new twist of the words just blows me away. Powerful.
Intense
and powerful with despair and longing. Well woven
Excellent
play on words.
"...elder bury whine..."
and many others ...still with a point easily seen. Loved it.
v~
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