This was so misleading. You said it was not a wimp story and that is exactly what it became. Please don't cheat your readers in this way.1 star rating.
I loved the story. I would find it easy to believe it is a true story and not just something you made up. So ignore the nay sayers. Simply unless you have had to live though a cheating spouse, you can't say how one should act. So much depends on how strong the marriage is when the cheating is discoverd.
As they say "been there done that".
You DID turn it into a wimp story... The skank even lied in her apology, saying she only cheated once... "I was so lonely, and it was once, just once."
Shows how much trust hubby can place in her... Never heard the saying fool me once, shame on you, fool me twice, shame on me? Someone lying after all that doesn't deserve trust...
Not a wimp story? Give me a break. This was twisted and a bit far fetched. Thanks for the offering, but your intro was misleading.
You call this a story!!
As it the sorry excuse for a human being of the author.
Not too shabby, get rid of the first few paragraphs before wifey discovers that she's a lezbo also. The slut had it coming and I think hubby needs to punish her a little more. Put her on her knees and let her suck the new girls pussy while hubby reams her little slut rear end out.
Isn't the story a lot better when the sex is fun. Personally I'd shop around for a good strap-on and let Amanda take care of wife's cheating ass. While Amanda was nailing that slut's ass, I'd be fucking her in the mouth to teach her a lesson!
P.S. This story is much better than the first one. People don't have to be guilty or mad to enjoy recreational sex.
Lezzie's don't turn me on.
Wish it would have been labeled correctly.
Well I'm definitely turned on. Good story :-)
a woman's fantasy. With women constantly complaining how men cheat, as if women never do, this just is not a realistic fantasy. Makes women happy, but for a faithful man, this is disgusting and not sexy. The a normal husband wouldnot have accepted her action - especially because she recorded it to see later. Lonely? Gosh and he was not lonely. He cheated? Not erotic, not a man's way of looking at this situation.
For the short read.
Because he went from being an outraged husband to just another cheating husband in light speed time. How does he set all this up so fast? And just because they have a "group cheat" things are going to be okay? BARF!
She follows him, lies to him ("only once" - bull) and Bradley? Within hours after he had left her he had a woman in his room, being ethically just as rotten and retarded as her.
Lot of your stories had a mix of imagination, and erotic talent behind them, this, felt like you were rushed to make a next chapter. You steered away from the situation, he discovered her affair, perhaps others too. If your writing style is not cheating wives, then stay away from the topic. In reality there is no erotic theme when a husband or spouse discovers the tragic truth of lies and betrayal from their spouse. Retaliation would occur when presented itself. He would have sought out to ruin those men that willing entered his home, his bed and his wife. Their families and spouses would feel the same pain and loss as he felt. You want to include a prostitute in the chapter, fine, but with both woman in the scene, honestly doubtful. the video took his spirit away, in regards to his wife. Those special shared emotions and desires he experienced with his wife are truly gone, worse her cheating was on their marriage bed. I would if this is part of your story ideas, re write chapter 2 with a more fitting approach.
And she simply didn't go visit her husband while he was out of town WHY???
Here's the thing... I actually agree with you. My husband is well aware that if he ever cheated, I might do more than just leave him, I might Lorena Bobbit his ass (well... other body part). And I hold myself to the same standard in real life. But the POINT of this STORY is cheating and I don't like stories where someone gets hurt by their spouse, so ALL of my Loving Wives stories are going to end up with the husband being okay with what happened... because otherwise it's just too sad and upsetting to me. I don't want to deal with it in a way that I find more realistic, I like the fantasy better. If you don't like that, that's fine, but I'm not the only one who writes that way... not sure why you're wasting your time reading the category.
Again no rating. I never venture into this category so I won't attempt to rate it as such. However, in reference to ch.1, the wife lied saying she only cheated once and we know she didn't stop until she realized it wasn't a replacement for her husband. Still she would have went to her grave never saying anything to her clueless. faithful husband, sort of like my true life situation.
How about writing a tale where the husband is a cheating asshole and let the wife accept it. I'll read it. Let me know if you will attempt this feat.
How is the cheating slut wife having sex with another woman going to erase the pain of discovering her cheating in the first place? He's made a devastating discovery and all of a sudden he's going to be okay? And in the same day? Without a chance to process the entire mess. It seems highly improbable. That's why I rated this story a "1".
Though I am not BTB if she make a genuine mistake, however if the sort out to cheat and humiliate the husband then he should go nuclear on her !
In this case the wife should have been ordered to watch the husband with Amanda and go through the ordeal of seeing her husband taking Amanda anally with passion !
Then afterwards for round 2 she could get involved in a 3sum.
The wife got off way to lightly. The husband should have a free pass to keep seeing Amanda for a year !
She cheats while he's away....multiple times (7) by her own estimates,over a two month period. Has the STUPIDITY to videotape it...and KEEP it for 4yrs! After discovering the past indiscretion,Her husband asks for 1 night by himself to think things over...and she can't even give him that! Goldeniangel's twist on how the Hubster handles this? The husband picks up a woman ....and let's her fuck his wife. Wow! I bet that will teach Suzie a lesson! Just a crap ending. I'm a BTB type of guy,but will admit there are times when restraint is useful and necessary. THIS..was not one of them. Why not just make the ending one big sleepover pillow fight. Lame. -BGunns
Took the enjoyment away,it's a RAAC she can't be trusted,not even close as written.
Makes me nauseous too think of it.
It's rather man hating to completely emasculate someone and then have him decide she is worth taking back.
Only once, huh? So she is a cheater and a liar. He's a moron. 'Nuff said.
He's right to want to end the marriage he started up right away which means she must have been in contact with him already. The husband also had a girl in the same day willing to do him and his wife when she shows up. Sounded like he may have been fooling around with her already. What kind of wife is she if she can't wait 5 months? She also let herself cheating on her working husband to be filmed , what a slut. Can never trust her
So......the punishment for her was for her husband (and herself) to screw some other woman? This goes beyond the husband being a wimp...his punishment became her reward. I've stolen your Toyota....punish me by buying me a new Mercedes!
Not a wimp husband? He would have to make some serious changes to get all the way up to wimp. Damn...I'd hate to see what you think a wimp husband is.
Yes, NOT a wimp!
Christ, he had a hot threesome including ass-fucking a hot chick, you WISH you could be such a wimp!
“I was so lonely, and it was once, just once.”
In Ch 1 she said she was unfaithful SEVERAL times, so it wasn’t “just once”, unless she’s referring to the anal?
“Brad's eyes were filled with his lustful wife as he pumped in and out of Amanda's pussy”
Um, I thought he was fucking her ass?
All these wimpy writers who let a wife say "I"m sorry, I was lonely, it was only sex" and get by with it needs THEIR wives to pull the same trick and see how THEY respond. If this is the best you can do I will try to remember to not read any more of your work as I can remember to not read Matt M. who never knew a cheating wife or a husband that accepted being a cuckold that he did not like. Even some of the better writers slip in a cuckold that accepts it once in a while. Not for me to read but good luck with your wife, hope she never cheats.
Just a blob a amoral shit. Everyone in this tale is reprehensible.
Move along folks nothing to read here
I would like to remind readers that 1. this story is fictional and 2. you shouldn't make assumptions. I'm not only a woman, I'm a wife, and I've never cheated in my life. Not on my husband, not on a boyfriend and not even on a guy that I was just dating. I also write non-con stories, even though I am vehemently against rape / molestation / sexual assault in real life. It's the difference between a fantasy that stays in your head and reality. Literotica is about fantasies.
If you don't like cheating fantasies, then you probably shouldn't read cheating fantasy stories. I suggest you check out some erotic couplings, romance or novellas, which you will probably enjoy more. Although, what it looks like you really enjoy doing is going around judging people based on your erroneous assumptions and telling them what to do. That says a lot more about you than it does about me and my cheating stories.
gave you a 5 sweetie
My first wife cheated on me dozens of times in the three years we were married; while I was spending weeks away with my colleagues, trying to make our business pay-off, she'd be off on the town, and she probably fucked half the town; to my certain knowledge, revealed in court papers, there were at least six different men she'd slept with multiple times while we were married. When I found out and confronted her, her excuse was "I was lonely..."
I asked her if she was lonely why the fuck didn't she get a dog, or go stay with my parents, instead of dragging a whole parade of dirt-bags and lowlifes to fuck in my bed; it made my skin crawl to think I'd been sleeping in that bed with her after she'd fucked Christ knows who there. I kicked her sorry arse out, and slammed the door in her face when she had the gall to ask me if we 'could work this out', and never said another word to her.
Our divorce was conducted without us ever meeting again, but everything I had when I married her was held in a family trust, including the house we lived in, so she didn't get one bent penny out of me, and when 'our' daughter was DNA tested and found to be someone else's child, I had my name legally stripped from her birth certificate, and she was gone as well.
I also spent several anxious months waiting on the results of all the STI tests before I could be confident I was clean and she hadn't left me any permanent parting-gifts.
Now, 10 years later, I have a lovely, caring wife, and three wonderful kids, all in private school. I gave my wife an Audi TTS Coupe for her birthday this year, and we have a 6 bed Georgian house with a pool, near Windsor in Berkshire, with a holiday home in Poole, Dorset, because she had the grace and good sense to be patient, helpful, supportive, and understanding while I established myself and built my business, and we're happy.
My ex lives across town, she has three kids, all by different men, and works as a cleaner to supplement her benefits, but she could have had everything my wife has now if she'd just kept her legs together, supported me, and given fidelity a shot while I had to go away those few weeks over the course of a couple of years. Now she has nothing, but I won't make the mistake of pitying her; she did that to herself, and I feel justice was done, I have complete closure, and that part of my life feels like wasted time that's now been glossed over.
Ignorance in these comments is priapic in scope!!!! Great story. Why wouldn't he take a loving wife back if it was a single episode in the past and she seemed genuinely remorseful and willing to debase herself as penance. Great FANTASY......your writing is very good. Keep it up.....or at least me up😀
Husband came across as too much of a wimp. Wife cheats, videos it and then asks him to do some of the things she learnt with her boyfriend... No standard normal self respecting man puts up with that. Stories are just that.. Stories... But having set a prologue where you say you tried a middle route.. Think you ended up more one way than the other. He certainly may have forgiven her but not the same day his world imploded.
I liked the story very much. I have sent you an email with longer comments that I hope you will find helpful.
Keep the writing going. You are talented and have a fertile imagination.
The trouble with the story is that it fails to recognize what marriage is all about. It is not purely about ego. It is not about someone getting hurt feelings because their wife cheated on them. It is about a lifelong partnership for the purposes of mutual survival and providing an environment in which to raise children. A spouse who cheats is neither a good partner nor a good parent. What they are is a security threat. They are dangerous. They are a potential disaster financially and emotionally. If you don't have children the smartest thing you can do is to get a divorce as soon as possible. If you do have children you may want to wait until your children or emotionally mature enough to deal with the divorce and the divorce will not affect their education where their future prospects. These stories always seem to be shortsighted and do not seem to deal with the realities of marriage.
in hopes to remain a wife. TK U MLJ LV NV
He ends up pleasuring his cheating wife to add his humiliation.
I suggest the author re write chapter 2 and send the wife a packing... this is way too much to get passed
If he were going away for 5 months and it wasn't due serving in the armed forced, his company would have ensured that he either bring his wife or routinely fly back. I have several friends who have moved over seas for jobs and they could bring their wives or routinely fly back. This story is unrealistic.
the 5-month comment. He never should have stayed away that long, and she never should have let him get away with it. I am still not completely certain about Amanda's appearance. Did he assume Suzie would follow him? Was he prepared to go one-on-one with Amanda, and come up with another "anything" at a later date?
but the timelines are wrong. Amanda should have happened later.
After Brad rejected Susan's suggestion that he let her see him service another man, she was feeling a bit dejected and left the house for a long walk. Just some time to think. The more she thought, the more something didn't quite fit together properly. Eventually she decided that she had to meet with Amanda, alone, and find out what was really going on. Somehow, it seemed too convenient that he'd find another woman the same day he threw his tantrum and walked out... too quick, too smooth.
The conversation with Amanda was an eye opener. Her version of events doesn't match Brad's at all. This didn't just all happen in a day. Brad had been hitting on Amanda for months. She didn't feel comfortable with this at all. Part of her discomfort was knowing that he was already married, but somehow that seemed to be just part of it. It didn't feel right. She told him that she'd only meet if Susan were part of the package deal, figuring that would make Brad go away. Susan would kill him if she knew he had been trying to seduce Amanda for so long. That didn't quite work out... who was the first person Brad called when he checked in to the hotel? Amanda. She initially took his word that the marriage with Susan had ended... and then did a bit of a double take when she showed up at the hotel. This whole thing was a setup? Great. And then there's that somewhat awkward feeling that maybe this was a bad idea, she doesn't want Brad... oh dear, she wants Susan.
Brad tries calling Amanda a few days later in an attempt to arrange another session; she declines. Eventually she seeks counselling, which leads her to the realisation that maybe she isn't so much bisexual as just plain gay. Maybe just she hasn't found the right woman yet as she'd been looking in the wrong places.
Meanwhile, Susan and Brad's relationship has been going downhill rapidly. Neither has been talking to the other for weeks. Susan tries in vain to save what can't be repaired, but ultimately gives up, packs her bags and leaves. The divorce ends up being anticlimatic, as if he hadn't noticed her gone and doesn't care. She's a free woman now, Amanda has proved to be, surprisingly, a good shoulder to cry upon during the worst of this. Susan is beginning to have some strange feelings, does she want Amanda in *that way*. This is so confusing, yet somehow it feels so right. It's as if there were a certain intimacy there that didn't exist in the last few years of a horrible marriage. Susan's jaw drops when she realises Amanda feels the same way.
Susan tries to tell herself that she's not gay, but at the same time the idea of trying to find another man after all she's been through just feels... wrong. Somehow, she's happy with Amanda and lonely when they're apart. Eventually she decides to stay where she's happy, in Amanda's loving arms.
So now we are gathered here today. "Do you, Susan, take this woman Amanda to be your lawfully wedded wife, to have and to hold, to love and to cherish..."
she only did it 1 time Marie, a lot of BS going around...
could of should of made it with a lot of more turns and twists......
Great writing maybe try some dialogue during sex?
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