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Coming Together for the First Time

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by Anonymous

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by kountrygirl09/06/05

Great Story

I read the prelude to this story for context. Very hot!

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by Anonymous03/17/06

Yep

Good description of the sex; very real; no other distractions. I really like your writing

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by Anonymous04/06/06

Amazing.

This story is absolutely incredible, I love it. The way that you've incorporated the romance between the two, as well as the sexual urges they have for each other is beautiful.

Great story!!

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by deliciousthoughts12/01/12

beautiful

so beautifully written. I loved it :)

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