All Comments on 'Ocean Lovers'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sensual Flow ~

I like this one !!

Felt as if I were there, peepin !!

Great imagery, sexy ... sensual flow too.

You did great with this one.

Just a lil steam and sweet love.

More Please ~

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Great visualization and while it flows well

seems a bit too list-like (just a small point);

I sense great talent here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
mmm, a wave..

of emotion, swims through my ocean... how you made me want to dip my toes in sand.... -sgp-

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
SHALL WE LEAP AND END

or turn and begin anew. TK U MLJ LV NV

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