You paint a vivid picture! Lyrical and well-constructed. Sexy poem from a sexy guy.
Remind me not to disobey you. :)
A naughty write, of a special tail.
From one, we all know so well.
It drips with cravings,
of gushing delights.
Spanks the muse
for all tonight !!!
Wicked and sweet !!
A powerful vision of
this was such a delicious treat.. y*u*m*m*y... reads like candy....... -sgp-
A nice piece, Salvor.
The words, the cadence, the images all beg to be read aloud and shared with a loved one.
Congrats on a job well done.
You honour me...again...I am yours
great connection between D/s, very nicely written gave me goose bumps...
A lovely piece. I know so many men who would love to be in her stilettos. ;-)
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